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When Tom tries to escape from the isolated island with Wilson there is an accident that Tom lost (loses) Wilson by accident (accidentally). Then Wilson comes back to the isolated alone. He is very sad and (he) misses Tom. He wants to find Tom and be with him because he finds that he had (fallen) in love with Tom though these long days. Then Wilson has a wish in his mind that he wants to become a beautiful woman and he could (can) stay with Tom forever. Luckily, he hears news that there are blue fairy and weird Linzey that can fulfill people’s dream then he decides to set up for his own journey.​ (Luckily, he hears news that there are blue fairy whose named weird Linzey that can fulfill people’s dream then he decides to set up for his own journey.​ ) {I think it is better not to separate the blue fairy from weird Linzey so I use whose to mean they are the same person.}

( I think you should tell more detail about why Wilson can speak.)

(Wilson wakes up and finds out that he is not on Tom’s boat but on the sea) Wilson: Tom? Tom where are you? Oh~no!! Wilson: (gets more and more nervous) Tom where are you? Please, please don’t leave alone. Tom!!!!

Suddenly a strong wave comes and makes Wilson bleach farer (farther). Wilson tries to defeats the waves; however, it is not working and he (is) just being push (pushed) by the continuous waves. Wilson knows that no matter how hard he tries (tried) it’s just not working so he gives up and keeps bleaching.

Finally, he has a feeling that he has touched the land so he looks around and finds out that this is the land that he and Tom had lived on. He remembers the time he and Tom lived on the island and knows that he would (will) never see Tom again that he stars to cry.

If you add how Wilson is sad when he found out that he might not see Tom, the story is expanded more and more.my question is how sad he is? At the moment a Sea Gull (sea gull) hears Wilson’s crying so he fellows the crying (sound) and find (finds) Wilson. Sea Gull: Hey, why are you crying loudly ? (Where does crying come from?) Wilson: Who are you? (Still keep sobbing) Sea Gull: I’m a Sea Gull and you? You look so funny and I have never seen anything that looks like you. What are you? Wilson: I’m (a) volleyball and my name is Wilson. Sea Gull: Oh! Then, Wilson why are you crying? Are you hurt? Wilson: No. No. I’m not hurt. I’m crying because I can’t find Tom and I will never see him anymore. (Wilson keeps sobbing again.) Sea Gull: Who is Tom? Is he also (a) volleyball just like you? Wilson: No. He is a human and the one that created (creates) me. (Thinking of this Wilson stars to cry again.) Sea Gull: Oh~no. Please stop crying. I can't take it anymore!!! (Sea Gull is going to be crazy because Wilson just keeps crying.)

Sea Gull: Wait a minute, I got an idea! I can find a rope and tie it on you. Then I could take you to find your Tom. Wilson: Really? Thank you! (Wilson Stops (stops) crying and begins to smile.) Sea Gull: Yes. Yes. Wait here. I’ll be here (back) soon. (Sea Gull flies away. Few minutes later there is a rope in Sea Gull’s mouth.) Sea Gull: Now, we can set up to find your Tom. (Begins to fly) Wilson: Wait! Wait! Sea Gull: What now? (A little angry) Wilson: I don’t think it is a good idea to see Tom now. Sea Gull: Why? (Screaming) Wilson: I…I think… (With low sound (voice) ) Sea Gull: What? (Sea Gull is really angry now!!!) Wilson: I think I’m in love with Tom. (His face is getting red.) Sea Gull: You what? Are you serious? Wilson: I want to become a beautiful woman that could (can) match Tom very well. (His face gets red more.) Sea Gull: Well, I know that there is a blue fairy that can make anyone’s dream (dreams) comes (come) true. Maybe you can go to find her. Wilson: Really? Then, how can I find the blue fairy? Sea Gull: I don’t know. Maybe you can go to Zora Island to see wizard Linzey. (He stars to fly away.) (loses) { I think wizard Linzey had better not show up here according to the fellowing plot. } Wilson: Wait. You are not going with me? Sea Gull: Of course not. Besides, I’m sick that you always cry! Bye and good luck. (He flies away and leaves Wilson alone.)